Live Music!
It is always a joy to see a live band in the theatre, and especially at the Fringe! The music itself was beautifully composed, performed, and balanced for the space. This composer could help write the next Bright Star, or Spitfire Grill - exceptional quality. Perhaps there could be a few more passes with some of the lyrics, but what a solid foundational talent. Speaking of talent, Brooklyn Kellenberg was a star - she brought true believability to her character Abby Lynn, and a voice that improved on the already amazing music. She delivered her dialogue with thought and purpose, even at some of the awkward writing. Theo Janke-Furman delivers a genuine and solid characterization of Jake. He and Kellenberg seemed to really play well off of each other, and gave us something to really root for. The show needed a bit more work in the writing department - much of the dialogue, especially for the insurance bigots, lacked flow, and were over-written. Granted, these types of people can tend to seem two-dimensional in real life, but I wished for a bit more eloquence and opportunity for the actors to fill in the blanks themselves. Did I spot the use of AI in the backdrops? If so... tsk tsk tsk. That is quite the irony. All that said - please keep making theatre, and keep improving. I can't wait to see (and especially HEAR) more!